Old Pictures Poem by Sandra Fowler

Old Pictures

Rating: 5.0


Clouds hang old pictures on the wavering air,
Like wine wallpaper threadbare to the light.
Cold leaves cut shadows on the poet's cheek.
The clarity is bell like to the bone.

The sun pulls down the heavy cloth of sky,
Muffles the scissor sound of rising wind.
One red bird burns upon the rim of dark.
God knows what name would bring him winging back.

Previously published, 'Appalachian Heritage'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jibin Joseph 01 February 2007

Clouds hang old pictures on the wavering air, this poem is a beauty.......thanks for sharing wishes jibin

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 February 2007

Old is gold and Sandra the best witness you gave by this word painting.

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Mary Naylor 03 February 2007

This is a beautiful mood piece, with fantastic imagery. I read it over several times and enjoyed it each time.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 06 February 2007

Light and shade, and a predominant colour of red - this poem paints a delightful picture. Patrick

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 07 February 2007

This is… Fantastic! ! ! Really very beautiful, You are quite the wordsmith!

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Roshni Shine 11 October 2016

Well done work, the way you've wrote this poem really inspires me!

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Raj Nandy 07 September 2009

Sandra, You are a master painter of poetic imagery in words! 10+ =Raj

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premji premji 04 June 2009

the red bird... i love to call him SUN..............

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Mamta Agarwal 05 December 2008

you paint with words, and your images are so evocative. although here there are no rhymes, but still the poem has music and rhythm. every time i read any of your poems, i just hang on to each line, amazing vision.10 Mamta

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Alison Cassidy 07 March 2008

The clarity of your images continues to astonish in this mesmerizing piece that paints, with light and grace, the last rays of the setting sun. 'The clarity is bell like to the bone.' and 'the scissor sound of rising wind.' are particularly evocative metaphors. Superb. love, Alison ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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