Ominous Silence Poem by Valsa George

A mournful silence overpowered the earth how to make a tune to a silence

The sudden calmness between the Gun shots and war drums is definitely an in indication of a big storm in the door. The turbulence through which the earth is moving today possibly the nature will now take an action. A very nice apprehension is drawn in this poem.

The mind of the man is creative and it manipulates whereas the the mind of certain animals has a practical reflex system that alerts them to respond to the urgency of situations. The earth which burnt for millions of years before it got cool enough to allow life on its water first and then on land is a paradoxical thing. The eerie silence it has to bear at times is parallel to its existence not withstanding all the odds. Mother Nature is the beautiful synonym of our planet that has to now and then let the man know of the things in waiting... A fine write indeed Valsa madam.

Written with a creative and compelling cataclysmic creativity wonderfully worded my friend!

With inspired lines that reach out to warn of the oncoming storm, as nature holds it's breath with an ominous silence! Superb write!

A great imagination, a valuable message, a lovely write from Valsa the great.

Your message reached to your readers, the helpless readers, but the leaders don't care, the selfish and heartless leaders.

It is a beautiful expression of feelings against the unjust activities going on in the world and the war zone are that I understands and concerns expressed are great.

Reading this poem I truly can feel an ominous silence all around me hinting a virulent storm. The way all unjust are occurring all round the earth, that ensures a menacing storm. I can hear an alerting bell through this lovely poem's voice.

I wasn't prepared for the full force of this poem. It is very powerful and moves with inexorable intensity. I had just read your FAIRIES poem, and I think there was fairy magic occluded my vision. I didn't realize that farewell to childhood beliefs had actually revived them in me on an unconscious level. And I quoted Ingeborg Bachmann's poem there. It actually belongs on this page. Your eloquent words are having surprising effects tonight!