On Behalf Poem by Rini Shibu

On Behalf

Rating: 5.0


Capture this heart into your soul
And then try to console
Weeping is my heart
Missed its beat, it's hard to start
One day you will find the rust
Then you won't be able to scrap the crust
Lost it's key, never it will laugh
The mind will talk on it's behalf

Friday, June 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 01 June 2018

Rini, an imaginative poem. Every heart needs to be captured to thrive and stay alive.+++10

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Lamar Cole 01 June 2018

Great poem about the heart.

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Kostas Lagos 02 June 2018

I hated this awful poem(actually it's an amazing poem but I wanted to write something different this time) !

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

Lovely poem Capture this heart into your soul And then try to console

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

A melancholy poem, rare from Rini. But touching.

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Then you won't be able to scrap the crust Lost it's key, never it will laugh The mind will talk on it's behalf. Rini, i hope that the key is found and the laughter returns. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 June 2018

Lost it's key, never it will laugh The mind will talk on it's behalf.......so true. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 June 2018

slightly sadish poetry speaks against the smiles you give lady have you forgotten the lane to my poetric domain

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