On Invisible Waves Poem by Seema Aarella

On Invisible Waves

Rating: 5.0


Where shall I hide my dear secrets?
If my contours itself betrayed me,
By leaving a visible trace of emotions
With shape, smell and colour in total,
Standing out like a perfect rose
That could never escape your admiring glance.

What novelty shall I express to you?
If you started reading my feelings
Through the crystal ball of
Your insightful mind, and
Embarrass my deeply thought out poems
By simply saying I knew that before.

How shall I keep pace with you?
With my shaking hands and cold
Fingers that are still learning to
Hold the pen, while you have
Already reached the pinnacle
Of talent with your sheer brilliance.

Why should I make a rendezvous with you?
If every living moment of my
Vibrant days and silent nights
You are attentive to everything
From intense sermons to feeble
Whispers, within the citadel of my poetic heart.

Tuesday, August 18, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 20 August 2009

a brilliant write...10++++++++

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Obinna Eruchie 20 August 2009

'! ! ! ...ON INVISIBLE WAVES', this is wonderfully expressed, Seema.

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Vaibhav Pandey 19 August 2009

an excellent poem ma'm...some awsome lines in there...lovely to read..10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 August 2009

each individuals perception is important...not only to that person but to the entire world...very sensible questions asked beautifully...10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 August 2009

'What novelty shall I express to you? If you started reading my feelings Through the crystal ball of Your insightful mind, and Embarrass my deeply thought out poems By simply saying I knew that before.' great!

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Deodath Debideen 31 October 2009

Poetic masters are great but honest writers tell their side too!

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Nalini Hebbar 26 October 2009

truly beautiful...very poetic and romantic...you do have a way with words...regards

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Reshma Ramesh 25 August 2009

bravo! seems....truly a great write...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 August 2009

Your power of expressions astonishing! 10+

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 21 August 2009

wonderful poem....truly amazing. very expressive.....and eloquent. thank you very much.

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