Once You Love Me Poem by shakil ahmed

Once You Love Me

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Once You Love Me

Oh, my love, once you love me,
You love me heart and soul
I will return it thousand fold
And my life will reach its goal.
Oh, my love, come to me
Carefully in the dark night
My cottage will be alighted
With your radiant light.
Oh, my love, don’t go with him
Look at my tearful eyes
I love you, I love you
I am not telling lies.
Oh, my love if you think
Your social standing is far above
Remember, dust becomes diamond
With the touch of holy love.
I will wait for your loving touch
Through the passage of thousand years
You say once only, ‘I love you’
In a way that no one hears.

Thursday, December 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 03 December 2015

A lovely poem, filled with emotion. The words you chose were simple, but they carry the message beautifully. It was a pleasure to read this.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2015

In the way that no one hears. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 06 December 2015

It so deeply written on your heart, I can see... A heartfelt poem... Really

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George Samuel 05 December 2015

A passionate poem about love, good job sir.

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Kewayne Wadley 04 December 2015

Emotional depth. I loved the subject and the approach. Great write! KW

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2015

Urging for once love is very fantastic definitely. I shall wait for your loving touch. Very wise and interesting poem shared...10

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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