One In Two Poem by Vijay Sai R

One In Two



Yes or No
This or That
Here or There
Enter or Exit
Buy or Sell
Move or Remain
Speak or Listen
Defend or Decimate
For or Against
Make or Break
Start or Stop
Smooth or Hard
Choosing one in two
Though looks so simple
Destiny lies in
What we decide!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cristina Teodor 02 June 2011

Simple and eloquent, you showed the quintessence of our existence, of having options and than decide, and we'll live with our decisions consequences. Beautiful written.. Cristina Teodor

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 03 June 2011

simply superb. what more you want. full 10 marks. Narayanan.R

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Mojtaba Ebrahimian 03 June 2011

Simple and at the same time ambi-valent that seems to be what the life is. 'To be or Not to be' Who knows? Who cares? I believe in 'how' to be.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 10 June 2011

Yes, simply you have put a thesis here and when it is thesis, there must have some antithesis. We have to wait for such anti writing. Otherwise a smooth reading we the readers enjoy it. Regards, pranab

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Sasikala Kamandula 28 April 2012

a smooth phylosophy of life! love to read. simple and sound! -sasikala.

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John Shea 05 January 2013

liked it much as one and two equals one strong person in the flow of life.

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Michael Silver 28 December 2012

Very well written. Something we should all stop and meditate on.

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Shai Cherry 10 November 2012

such a smooth poem i really liked it

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Vincent Kuo 28 May 2012

Deftly crafted poem, with a sense of living philosophy. Love it!

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Sasikala Kamandula 28 April 2012

a smooth phylosophy of life! love to read. simple and sound! -sasikala.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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