One Million Years Before Christ Poem by Akhtar Jawad

One Million Years Before Christ

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As long as main remained a slave of instincts,
he remained an animal and civilizations could not grow.
But then he learned to smile on joys,
and he learned to cry on pains.
The delicious cake of desires
with beautiful icing of fine arts
was baked on that day,
when man felt pains of someone else.
Earth got a message from heavens,
well done sweetheart man is now in love.
he is now changing recipes of nature,
refining it and baking cakes
more delicious and more beautiful.
A long time has passed
I was busy and ignored the earth.
Time is now ripen
man is matured.
I have decided to give more time to the earth.
My message of love has been conveyed to him.
Those who understood this message will survive,
and for those who cannot understand it
the volcano is about to erupt.
Fittest will survive and unfits will be turned into ashes.
And let all be known the test of fitness is nothing else
it's love only love.

Sunday, February 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: movie
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 March 2016

Verily, a true picture of human progress from the human instinct to a civilized though the word civilized is ambiguous

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 03 March 2016

Marvellous...the flow of words and the humane concept of making life a delicacy only through love has been written in the most humanistic way with a great symbolistic imagery. loved it Jawad Sahib. You R Great.10+++++++++

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Souren Mondal 03 March 2016

All it takes for a human being to be a true human being is to have the virtue of love in them, and not the terrible ones like hatred, jealousy, envy, wrath etc. If only we understood this, we would have been a far better species.. Thank you for sharing Akhthar sahab.

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Bri Edwards 01 March 2016

As long as main remained a slave of instincts, ooops! i think you meant man or main man ;) i like cake and icing! where is the ice cream? ? does 'love of ice cream' count? ? ? a nice poem. to MyPoemList bri :)

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