One more day is again a past:
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The sun by setting, begetting the dusk -
Says one more day is again a past.
Do not know exactly –
Who has gained or who lost,
But for sure – you‘ve advanced –
A day more towards the end.
Before the sun is set
It emanates a light - golden red.
With the last light as twilight –
Everything was looking so bright.
It compels me to think myself
That before my end in this earth–
Will I also be looking so bright –
As the twilight shows the end.
The sun by setting, begetting the dusk -
Says one more day is again a past.
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Amitava (21.10.2013)
Beautiful flow, with well crafting poem..i love each detail and curling thoughts, it is artistic expression here..it again one second that past us...but one second to combines seconds and build min of memories sooner_Soul
As the sun sets it lights the world before lying upon the horizon in it's past. And the following sunrise says arise it was not your last. Hoping my end is as bright as the sunrise as I look one last time upon my final horizon. This poem has great meaning to me, thank you Amitava. RoseAnn
Life is full of sunrises and sunsets where people are born into this world and die. Its the bit in between that matter, how we live our lives.
A very good poem Amitava you are very creative and artistic. Life is full of sunrises and sunsets. Let us enjoy all these wonders of the universe for one day the sun will set forever. Just beautiful.
Let us hope that our twilight years will be crimson gold like the brilliance of the setting sun! A good write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem! What a motivation from the setting sun!