Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,721 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

One World With One Race - Poem by Amitava Sur

No matter which country, which religion
And what color you belong.
It matters me, whether you're with humanity,
Where I try to belong.

We all on this earth -
Are the children of Divine
Like a bouquet of flowers in a bunch,
Some may be small and some are big -
But together it looks fine.

Mortal is this life, here -
Nobody is for good,
Still we hate - and fight with might
And end this life with - no good.

Love all and be kind to all
Kindle the lamp of hope.
Arise awake …. united we stand
For sure, we shall reach the goal.

The goal is.....
One world with one race
The mankind with full of grace.

Where all will be bold and bright
Our heads will be kept straight upright,
An unhindered peaceful world
Like the abundant blue sky.

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Amitava (4.11.2012) 7-00 am


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Topic(s) of this poem: peace


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It's about a world where there is no difference between any caste & creed neither any difference between any religion. It's all about a unified world.

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Amitava Sur

Comments about One World With One Race by Amitava Sur

  • Hans Vr (10/5/2014 6:16:00 AM)

    Excellent, a world full of peace, one race named humans, so good. I love it. (Report)Reply

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  • Savita Tyagi (6/30/2014 3:58:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with great message of love and unity. If more would follow the world would've a better place. Rhythm and flow is superb. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/16/2014 5:46:00 PM)

    One world united in peace like the flowers in a gigantic garden, bringing joy and beauty
    to all the world. Touched my mind and heart, with hope that someday our earth will be
    that ideal you have portrayed in this poem. Great one, most artistic poet, Amitava! RoseAnn
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  • Erika Wingo (2/27/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    A wonderfully stunning write. I hope your words touch and inspire many others to open their hearts and minds in this way. You have certainly done so for me! (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (2/8/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    Great title, Wonderful words... let us prayer that this one race is in this lifetime (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (1/11/2014 6:02:00 AM)

    mankind with full grace, very fine, thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (1/1/2014 4:23:00 AM)

    Beautiful with great wisdom and humanity, to love is the most powerful emotion of all it brings joy, peace and hope to our world!
    I love this inspired write!
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  • Romeo Della Valle (10/3/2013 4:45:00 PM)

    Powerful and thought provoking write that clearly shows your talent and ways to freely express your feelings and concerns towards humanity! 10+++ thank you for sharing and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Regards from New York City www.romeodellavalle.com (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (10/2/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Love is the binding force and all differences of class, caste and colour disintegrate when human hearts are filled with the magic potion of divine love. Unfortunately each one builds a citadel around him and within these walls of segregation, he confines himself! A beautiful poem with a lofty message! (Report)Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham (9/22/2013 7:30:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem my friend. Nicely worded and well
    penned. One world: race, creed, color. No more separation.
    A flower with many colors and still beautiful. Will bear fruit one
    day. Hope for the best. Very inspiring
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  • Hazel Durham (9/20/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem full of hope for the future where love will rule supreme! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, November 24, 2014


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