Crimson Love

Rookie - 70 Points (18 / Prince Charming)

One Star - Poem by Crimson Love

I lay upon dewy ground,
Daisies of yellow and white,
in a sea of green,
As the sun fades beyond the reaches of my eye,
I find Peace within this night sky.

Scattered with the hot specks,
of passionate sun,
Small remnants,
of light left behind,
Every star,
is definite,
with indefinite reaches.

the heat,
is love,
I only wish to one,
day perhaps hold my own star,
always in a heated embrace,

That one star,
that I'd make the center,
of my never-ending galaxy.


Comments about One Star by Crimson Love

  • (12/9/2011 12:51:00 AM)


    A never ending galaxy, with that special star to embrace..A rare exquisite expression..Wishes, my friend :) (Report) Reply

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  • (12/8/2011 1:34:00 PM)


    Wow! Crim this is so beautiful..

    'that one star,
    that i'd make the center,
    of my never-ending galaxy'
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 10, 2011


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