One Last Glimpse Of Heat Poem by Crimson Love
One Last Glimpse Of Heat
Spade in hand,
I dig that in which I shall sleep,
I dig that in which I shall forever lie,
ready for death, ready to die,
snow covered earth,
remebered as my only warmth,
blue lips whisper dying words...
'I've lived and lost...now I shall lose once more'
Hands fall heavily,
ready to take,
the life unowned and unworthy,
of such redemtion called life.
fingers dig their way into my chest,
ready to rip the very muscle pumping love,
I grab hold and squeeze,
stricken by pain I'm siezed.
Still pumping, and trying to breath,
my heart is out upon this crimson sleeve,
Forever stare and wonder..
and read all my pain,
its out in the open,
I'm the only blame.
I've said my words,
I've told of death,
where crimson veins bled,
red icicles hang,
teeth rapidly chatter,
as death touches me,
I look away,
if only for a moment,
I stare at the sun,
to remeber such fire,
In this time of ice.
Death of loved ones leaves behind such misery dear Crimson. And reading about it makes a fresh wound bleed again. The way you wrote this, made me shiver. Hypothetically speaking, I suppose you mean without being with the one you love, you might as well be dead? Yes, it strikes a familiar chord, but our hearts still keeps beating. Faintly, untill one day it goes wild in our chest again. What a deceitful organ! What a great poem. May you find the heat of the sun again and the heat of love. It is a rather great feeling - the thing called love!
Thank you for inviting me to read this. I like the power behind it
wonderful distributions, it was a wonderful read thank you for asking me to read it.
Really powerful, i liked the last bit of symbolism between the fire and ice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 2:07:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
beautiful poem Crimson digging the grave in which you shall sleep in it forever... hopefully with come later so you can have your love and heat and passion again with ur lover ~Bella