Opportunities Poem by Rini Shibu

Opportunities

Rating: 4.2


It's hard to play
and win a game
Easy to throw away
Opportunities that came
But your mind sways
in deep distress
Interest fades away
over time due to mistrust
Nothing will be left
to hold on and climb
You will be in the cleft
And the impact lasts for a lifetime

Monday, May 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 28 May 2018

An excellent write Rini.+++10

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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2018

As always a poem of hgh standard!

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

Opportuniies come in our lives but Interest fades away over time due to mistrust. A thought nicely converted in a thoughtful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 June 2018

Beautiful poem. Very true said in few words, its impact lasts for a lifetime. Loved it.

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Messaoud Allalouche 30 May 2018

I like this poem by Rini

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Dr. Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

Opportunity never knocks at the door always! We should always avail it.....GOOD ONE!

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A poignant write well crafted. It depicts realities of life.10

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