Pain Poem by Rini Shibu

Pain

Rating: 5.0


Pain is just a word
More than a sharp blade
Tears apart your heart
Bleeds to make it a weakest part
Feeling the unbearable pain so deep
Takes away all your sleep

Friday, February 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumar Hussain 07 February 2020

A vbeautifu poem! Thanks for sharing

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Bill Cantrell 07 February 2020

Very well written! ! So good to see you posting again

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Smith 07 February 2020

You are my sweetheart.......

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Your future 07 February 2020

Don't go near Robert Murray Smith......

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Budhashaya Behera 07 February 2020

You have much pain that I feel, but it will go away. I suggest you chant Krishna's name. HE IS VERY GRACIOUS, .

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Michael Cochrane 14 August 2022

Well written excellent poem

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 August 2020

sensational poem about pain

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 February 2020

Heart wrenching poem, dear Rini! I have been missing you all the time. Aptly expressed. A 10 Top Score for this amazing poem. I wish you all happiness in life, please keep writing. Thank you so much for sharing this poem. Remember that you stll have many many friends on PH..

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Aqua Flower 18 February 2020

A bleeding heart is the most painful. Concisely expressed!

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Captain Cur 07 February 2020

A concise definition of pain, mental, physical and emotional.

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