Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 95,150 Points (1978 / India)

Pain - Poem by Rini Shibu

Pain is just a word
More than a sharp blade
Tears apart your heart
Bleeds to make it a weakest part
Feeling the unbearable pain so deep
Takes away all your sleep

Topic(s) of this poem: pain


Comments about Pain by Rini Shibu

  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (2/29/2020 1:42:00 PM)

    Heart wrenching poem, dear Rini! I have been missing you all the time. Aptly expressed.
    A 10 Top Score for this amazing poem. I wish you all happiness in life, please keep writing.
    Thank you so much for sharing this poem. Remember that you stll have many many friends on PH..
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  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (2/18/2020 6:52:00 AM)

    A bleeding heart is the most painful. Concisely expressed! (Report)Reply

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  • Captain CurCaptain Cur (2/7/2020 9:23:00 PM)

    A concise definition of pain, mental, physical and emotional. (Report)Reply

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  • Budhashaya Behera (2/7/2020 9:21:00 PM)

    You have much pain that I feel, but it will go away. I suggest you chant Krishna's name. HE IS VERY GRACIOUS, . (Report)Reply

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  • Your future (2/7/2020 8:53:00 PM)

    Don't go near Robert Murray Smith...... (Report)Reply

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (2/7/2020 8:34:00 PM)

    A n insightful poem. Rini. It appears that a mad troll has infiltrated this site. Dillip Swain has admitted he is the main troll. I will immediately post with a copy of his admission. It's a shame he is so infantile. He claims to have a PHD. (Report)Reply

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  • Smith (2/7/2020 8:29:00 PM)

    You are my sweetheart....... (Report)Reply

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  • Bill CantrellBill Cantrell (2/7/2020 8:13:00 PM)

    Very well written! ! So good to see you posting again (Report)Reply

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  • Kumar Hussain (2/7/2020 7:57:00 PM)

    A vbeautifu poem! Thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 7, 2020



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