Ordinary Poem Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion
Ordinary Poem
Some simple words of mine
Come from thoughts within;
They don't touch the heart,
The mind and soul of men.
Though the lines and words
Speak in meter and rhyme;
The sense is not enough
To make it so sublime.
Yes, words are down-to-earth,
So easy to understand;
But it won't earn a place
Among great poems in the land.
It isn't unusual or fancy,
Neither complex nor special;
But it comes from the heart
Of a poet without pedestal.
Expecting not any rate and praise
From each and every one of them;
I only love to pen and share
My ordinary poem.
Some simple words of mine Come from thoughts within; They don't touch the heart, The mind and soul of men. A superb poem, sir Bernard.
Not so ordinary, only a master could thus play with words and verses, lovely write.. enjoyed reading very much.. thanks for sharing
you have shared your poem well, but it is not an ordinary poem, it is a wonderful poem from the heart of a great poet, , if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments
Simple words come within only in love waiting to share. A fantastic poem shared with wise vision. Interesting poem.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 5:45:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Brilliant, Bernard. Perhaps the words are ordinary, but in combination they form a meaning that is truly transcendental. This is an absolutely brilliant verse!