Monday, August 29, 2011


Rating: 2.9
the lizard of happiness
crawls down my neck
swift crossing bosom -
thin flash on hot skin
disappears noiseless
between opening-legs
in a concrete building
on the seventh floor
air conditioner and iron bed
digit-key-code for the door
plastic table and TV
still organic you and me
ONElia AVElar
Unwritten Soul 08 March 2012
It really organic, and water with distilled thought...Since our life still under construction keep your life organic always! hahaha joking :) _Unwritten Soul
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Hans Vr 13 October 2011
Wow, ONElia. Long time, I had not visited your poetry, but you are still a top poet.
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Original Unknown Girl 30 August 2011
I love this poem, there is a subtle eroticism to it. The lizard of happiness crawling across the neck and swift crossing bosom give us a hint of something more intense and yet the poem itself is scant of detail so gives chance for the imagination to fill in the gaps. Great work dear One. HG: -) x
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Anil Kumar Panda 30 August 2011
a meaningful ink.pokes my mind.liked it.
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