Organic Poem by ONElia AVElar

Organic

Rating: 2.9


the lizard of happiness
crawls down my neck
swift crossing bosom -
thin flash on hot skin
disappears noiseless
between opening-legs
in a concrete building
on the seventh floor
air conditioner and iron bed
digit-key-code for the door
plastic table and TV
still organic you and me

Monday, August 29, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: concrete
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 08 March 2012

It really organic, and water with distilled thought...Since our life still under construction keep your life organic always! hahaha joking :) _Unwritten Soul

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Hans Vr 13 October 2011

Wow, ONElia. Long time, I had not visited your poetry, but you are still a top poet.

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Original Unknown Girl 30 August 2011

I love this poem, there is a subtle eroticism to it. The lizard of happiness crawling across the neck and swift crossing bosom give us a hint of something more intense and yet the poem itself is scant of detail so gives chance for the imagination to fill in the gaps. Great work dear One. HG: -) x

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 August 2011

a meaningful ink.pokes my mind.liked it.

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