Orphaned (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Orphaned (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Eyes dry, all tears shed

Rain soaks walls, floors, beds, roads, dreams

Nothing left to rest upon.

Tuesday, December 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,loneliness,orphan,poverty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2017

A very nice haiku. Thanks for sharing..10

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Susan Williams 28 December 2017

Very good examination of the different ways we can be orphaned. I had never thought of it like that- - having your home and its pictures and memorabilia swept away by flood or tornado or fire, does make orphans of us all. Well thought out and rendered. 10++++++++++++++++

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

A beautiful and creative approach to the way of being orphaned. Love it.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 February 2018

A beautiful and creative approach to the way of being orphaned. Love it. 10+++ for the nice haiku shared with us.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

Eyes dry, all tears shed Rain soaks walls, floors, beds, roads, dreams Nothing left to rest upon. Beautiful haiku.10++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

Rain soaks walls, floors, beds, roads, dreams Nothing left to rest upon. A real eye opening poem on getting orphaned. Love the theme. 10++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

Rain soaks walls, floors, beds, roads, dreams Nothing left to rest upon. A real eye opening poem on getting orphaned. Love the theme.

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

A beautiful and creative approach to the way of being orphaned. Love it. 10+++ for the nice haiku.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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