Orpheus Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Orpheus

Rating: 3.6


Breezes expect now our moon...
That to tell him evening gossips...
Moon, with hope searches the suns...
On the heart plays with melancholy
As on the harp Orpheus...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 22 February 2009

On the heart plays with melancholy As on the harp Orpheus... wowwwwwwwww heart plays---on the harp of orpheus brilliant --10 anjali

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Roland Bastien 24 February 2009

That to tell him evening gossips ---- Crispy tells.....Euridice will be jaleous

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~ Jon London ~ 28 February 2009

Music like that of angels can be heard whilst reading this wonderful piece 10+ as always my sweet

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Sherrie Tappenden 17 April 2009

Poor Orpheus in his darkness, like the moon searching the sun for the light of his lost love. Beautifully written.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

Breezes expect now our moon......... Moon searching with hope excellent imagery...........enjoyed reading

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Babatunde Aremu 23 October 2015

'Moon, with hope searches the suns'. Good imagery. I think this about someone having burning desire for love of another. Great write!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 October 2015

Breeze plays rough to hide harp of Orpheus. Oscar appears to hunt attention. And melancholy really pushing to close the window. Will try to read next time. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2015

Nice work with the muse of your sweet mind. Thanks for sharing.

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R. H. Peat 30 August 2010

Tsira This looks translated. Is English a second language? I love the images but I don't see all of the intent the way that it flows. a poet friend RH Peat

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Obinna Eruchie 08 October 2009

Wonderful poem on Orpheus.

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