Susan Lacovara

Gold Star - 6,656 Points (1963 / New York)

Our Better Place - Poem by Susan Lacovara

Whenever we walk together
We find our better place
Worries melt away for another day
And the sun is on my face
No other place I'd rather be
Then in the breeze blown off the sea
Me and you...glad to be
In perfect company
In our better place

Whenever we sit together
Cuddled up without a care
Life plays on like a favorite song
In our easy chair
With no need for words between us
Your eyes say all I hear
Where would I roam if I, alone
And couldn't find you near
In our better place

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship

Poet's Notes about The Poem

(03/18/14) for my perfect friend...

Comments about Our Better Place by Susan Lacovara

  • (3/20/2014 1:05:00 AM)

    Worries melt away for another day
    And the sun is on my face

    immense is the joy of togetherness!
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  • Anthony Burkett (3/19/2014 12:30:00 PM)

    The world is so much kinder with a friend like that... no words needed to express the loyalty felt by both... ENJOY! (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (3/19/2014 1:56:00 AM)

    , , , to have a friend like that, , , you are lucky, , , sweet poem, , , (Report) Reply

  • (3/18/2014 6:56:00 PM)

    oh ever so sweet your eyes say all I HEAR (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/18/2014 6:50:00 PM)

    It is nice to find the better place. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (3/18/2014 6:44:00 PM)

    With no need for words between us, your eyes say all I hear. Love this line! ! !
    Lovely poem. So meaningful!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014

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