Our Mind Is A Battlefield Poem by Bharati Nayak

Our Mind Is A Battlefield

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Our mind is a battlefield
Where Kurus and Pandavas fight
On the one side, there is untruth, jealousy and hatred
On the other side, there is truth, love and peace.
On the above, like Lord Krishna
There is a Conscience controlling our mind
Which checks our wrong doings
And tries to keep us on the truth side.
If one succumbs to greed
And disobeys the direction of conscience
He is doomed for a fall
Like the powerful Kauravas
Who got defeated and killed.
At the end of Mahabharat.
@ Bharati Nayak

Sunday, April 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: mind,being right,truth,conscience,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2023

Can you tell me dear Bharati, where did Pandavas go? Did any one of them reach heaven? Did Dharmaraj reach heaven? Can you provide us some details aftermath? How do you relate your mind to a battle field? ?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2023

Dear Bharati, be a great poetess...earn name and fame but never underestimate people of your own soil whom you have not yet known....Jay Shree Krishna

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2023

Where did all the warriors go when Panchali was tortured and insulted by Dhusasan in Kurusabha? Who saved her? Jai Shree Krishna!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2023

Belasena said: I have seen only one chakra that was doing its job! The counting of every warrior is false....Jai Shree Krishna

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2023

Dear Bharati, Have you gone into the core of the Mahabharat? I doubt if anybody has killed anyone there as I only believe what Belasena said at the end of the war!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2023

I don't find any novelity here...nothing is there. Is it a good poem Bharati?

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Bharati Nayak 12 April 2023

Thank you.

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