! ! Our Sun Reveals Poem by Bob Blackwell

! ! Our Sun Reveals

Rating: 4.9


Shades of life return,
as our sun, brush paints
a landscape of love,
to brighten up our globe.

Sun mottled colours,
the energy of being,
form a palette of life,
to illuminate our world.

Nature made clear, the
fruits of field and forest,
give knowledge of path
to our enlightenment.


06-06-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely write bob..a picture of sun with a message.....10

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A palette of wisdom, a brush of love and a poem of great beauty. 10 Karin Anderson

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

yes a beautiful write indeeed...nice refreshing one indeeed....enjoyed it very much...great poem to get away from the complexities of Econ and Mathematical calculations.... thanks for this one sir 10+++ with love shan

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Lady Grace 08 June 2009

sun is the best source of energy, sun gives life to all living things..sun reveals all the hidden moments of darkness.if it is compared to life, it drives ourself well..grace

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Anjali Sinha 07 June 2009

wonderful picture you have created with the sun being central with mottled hues excellent write -10 anjali

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Yelena M. 05 September 2009

Bob, one of my favourite poems of yours. Inspiring lines of how the sun forms a palette of life illuminating the universe. Thanks for sharing very much and best wishes to you. Yelena M.

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Sandra Fowler 19 June 2009

I love to think of the sun painting.Your poem is filled with light. As always, Sandra

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Vidi Writes 15 June 2009

This poem is an open call to all Come out from those daily deal of juggles There is so much to learn from nature. Catch those revealing pearls If captured inside, nothing can be seen. Good one. Enjoyed the theme. Thank you.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2009

Yes; Sun reveals...but it seems humans have only eyes and no visions proper... beautiful awareness poem Bob..the economy of words there in conveying your message is really admirable...thanks...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 June 2009

'Nature made clear, the fruits of field and forest, give knowledge of path to our enlightenment.' you know sir, i just returned from a complicated lecture...and read this one..just relaxed my mind....filled me with great contentment....nice refreshment indeed...enjoyed it as if i m drinking Mango nectar..thank you for this one...10++ regards shan

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