Pain Poem by Ellen Kang

Pain

Rating: 4.4


Pain
Pain over here pain over there
Pain in my heart pain in my soul
Pain in my mind
Pain in my skin pain in my bones

Pain being caused left and right
Pain being caused till the heart bleeds red
Pain being caused till the skin and bone rip
Pain being caused till you break into tears

Pain at school
Pain at home
Pain in my head, pain in my heart
Pain in my mind, pain in my soul

Pain happening in my sleep
Pain happening in my thoughts
Pain happening when I’m alone
Pain happening in the shower, in my room, in my bed, in my house where I’m all alone
Pain happening every hour, every minute, every second of my life

Pain caused by anger and hate
Pain caused by hurt
Pain caused by greed
Pain caused by sorrow and depression
Pain caused by grief and confusion

Pain caused by your family and friends
Pain caused by the world
Pain caused by people you love

Pain driving me crazy
Causing me to take pills till it fills up my veins
I go to sleep never to wake up and see that light
The light that will end my pain for good

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jhon Fernandis 10 November 2008

what a poem and this feeling is also matching to my feellings thanks for shareing i like you'r way to form you'r feeling in a lucid way or in short

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Mohammad Mahmoudi 06 February 2009

it seems that u sufferd alot in this world

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Jovahna Davis 01 June 2009

You must been through alot but dont worry i have too just remember that ur storm is almost over hold ur head up

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Let me give you something to think about. Killing ones self is a permonant solution to a temporary problem. thanks for sharing

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Star Dust 26 September 2008

lost for words... one word brilliant - well two- brilliant poem! ! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 January 2016

Awe inspiring poem depicting motley manifestations of pains. If pain is like a dark night, it must be followed by dawn of happiness, as a rule of the nature. An excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

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Bernard Snyder 07 January 2016

I enjoyed this poem. Through it all, continue to keep your head up. Thanks for sharing. I give this a 10 rating!

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Lyn Paul 07 January 2016

Pain comes in many different forms and the worst I believe is when someone has been taken from you in separation. May things have truly turned for you and I hope there is true positives in your life. Thank You

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Nosheen Irfan 07 January 2016

Simply mind-blowing. Every word expresses the pain the poet is going through. Something that every sensitive soul can relate to.10

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 January 2016

So intense the PAIN-A-TIC poem. Rather the writing could be the manifesto of PAINICISM! .....Well exposed. Thanks.

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