......With pain in his heart,
He decided to take the long way back.....
Hoping against hope that she wud call him back..
Alas, ther was no shout nor a call....
He cud see his heart break and his spirits fall....
But he knows frm the bottom of his heart that his luv is true.....
And one day they will be holding hands in the open blue...
He knew he wud wait for that day...
Cuz fate had it that way.............
Simply mind blowing. Its your true love that matters. Love doesn't need to be reciprocated always. Amrita
This is a wonderful poem that made me think.It was very sad and you expressed yourself so well Ashish! Oh and great rhyme scheme and it fit the mood of the poem perfectly! Thanx so much for sharing.... Take care of U =Shelley=
I really like this poem it really makes you think...good job XXchelsiXX
Beautiful insight here Ashish......... thank you for your expressive words to tell a real story. That's a part of the growth of life. Colleen.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
short yet full of power! keep it up Ashish! =)