Pain Unbearable Poem by asma bahrainwala

HI, a very beautifully written poem though one can't help thinking that these type of words are from the heart born out of an unpleasant experience

Ha another new technique from you. But very well written with a few words.

Very real life! Loved it! Susan B

'Alleviate grief Bring relief Let go Ego'...well said! ! Nice way of getting the idea across. Reuben.