asma bahrainwala

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Patience Is The Key - Poem by asma bahrainwala

Though life is a creased cloth,
It can be
Ironed out.

Though life is a confounded pickle,
It can be
Sorted out.

Though life is a spider’s web,
It can be
Straightened out.

Patience is the key
If you
Want to live.

8th September 2006

Comments about Patience Is The Key by asma bahrainwala

  • (1/5/2007 5:22:00 AM)

    Yes asma
    You got that right patience is the key
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  • (12/9/2006 10:45:00 AM)

    Patience is the key to success! good thinking Asma. Nice to read this poem! (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2006 6:09:00 AM)

    It is easy to write a long poem full of words. It is very difficult to write one like this and still be able to communicate. Great technique. (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2006 11:07:00 PM)

    'Confounded pickle'...a curious similie!
    I like it for its candid expression and profound philosophy!
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  • (9/27/2006 3:16:00 PM)

    Clever: a neat, concise and polished poem! Good write! (Report) Reply

  • (9/15/2006 10:39:00 PM)

    Wise words from a fabulous poet...keep writing Asma!

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  • (9/8/2006 9:51:00 PM)

    great words of wisdom asma...great (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 4, 2010

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