Though life is a creased cloth,
It can be
Ironed out.
Though life is a confounded pickle,
It can be
Sorted out.
Though life is a spider’s web,
It can be
Straightened out.
Patience is the key
If you
Want to live.
8th September 2006
Asma…
Wise words from a fabulous poet...keep writing Asma! Preets
Patience is the key to success! good thinking Asma. Nice to read this poem!
It is easy to write a long poem full of words. It is very difficult to write one like this and still be able to communicate. Great technique.
'Confounded pickle'...a curious similie! I like it for its candid expression and profound philosophy!
Clever: a neat, concise and polished poem! Good write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great words of wisdom asma...great going...love...nalini