Pants Of Fire Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Pants Of Fire

Rating: 5.0


Like grass
after the winters storms have passed
and the first wisps
of spring have come
to bolster you
you lie.
And I...
like an unfledged foal
came to graze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simon Whild 15 November 2005

A lovely oriental feel here. I loved the foal metaphor. Very vivid.

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***** ********* 27 October 2005

This reminds me, what lying barstewards the vast majority of men are! Sweet really! ! (NOT) Good short kick in the nuts imo, goes a very long way. Grinning Tai

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Allan James Saywell 27 October 2005

REMINDS ME OF THOSE PINK HOT PANTS THE CHICKS USED TO WEAR IN THE SEVENTIES I USED TO BECOME HOT IN THE PANTS WHEN I SAW THEM WARM REGARDS AJS

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