Paradiso (Paradise) Poem by Sandra Feldman

Paradiso (Paradise)

Rating: 5.0


Just to be together,
Would be Paradise,
Glancing at each other,
That would be so nice,
Oh, to ever Love You,
As I do today,
Opens Heaven's portals,
What more can I say?

Yes, this burning feeling,
Just won't go away,
Please do let me love you,
Always in this way
Deeply, so profoundly,
As I do today.

Love is like a Castle,
Strong and safe and sure,
Love is all that matters,
When it's true and pure.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 05 October 2013

nice write very nice. enjoyed the read

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Valerie Dohren 01 October 2013

Beautiful Sandra, you have a wonderful way with words.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2013

The Princess has rightly said, it's concise and beautiful! It's a song of a paradise. 'Love is like a Castle, Strong and safe and sure, Love is all that matters, When it's true and pure.' A strong and pure definition of love.

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Princess Lilypad 29 September 2013

This is beautiful. Concise. Love! !

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