Fabrizio Frosini

Gold Star - 160,675 Points (1953 / Tuscany, Italy)

Parallel Dimensions - Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

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Laughing,
You asked a pale, distraught
Moon
For a smile that would compete with
Yours (much brighter) , fully certain
That she couldn't win.
Then, through a restive finger you
Fended off the thirst from the
Chapped lips
And lifted the crowd of thoughts
Squatted down
At the warmth of your
Sight — the thoughts of us
Both. Interlaced.

When did all this happen
And where?
Maybe in a different corner of the
Multiverse, out of our
Narrow space-time — Boundary of the
Mind which leaves me no escape.



(Florence, February 2014)

Topic(s) of this poem: human condition, love, memory, psychological


Poet's Notes about The Poem

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this is the English translation of my poem ''DIMENSIONI PARALLELE''

This poem is part of my collection ''Nella Luce Confusa Del Crepuscolo'' (''In the Uncertain Light of the Twilight'')

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Comments about Parallel Dimensions by Fabrizio Frosini

  • Sarah Persson (5/2/2016 9:29:00 AM)


    A beautiful romance. Such a pleasure to read. Thank you Fabrizio (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (5/2/2016 9:42:00 AM)

    it's very kind of you, Sahra, thanks

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  • Sahra Hussein (11/28/2015 3:02:00 AM)


    I really like it. it is lovely one! ! (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (11/28/2015 1:48:00 PM)

    lovely comment, too.. :)
    Grazie!

  • Pamela Sinicrope (9/11/2015 10:41:00 PM)


    That's so romantic and charming! The mind is another dimension, out of time, especially in this context! I wish I could read your poem in Italian... Though the translation is still good. Lovely poem. (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (9/12/2015 4:34:00 AM)

    thank you, Pamela, for your nice words. I've much appreciated your coming by and commenting on my poem.

  • Kelly Kurt (9/9/2015 9:12:00 PM)


    A wonderful poem, Fabrizio. The mind is another dimension, out of time. (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (9/10/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    ''The mind is another dimension, out of time.''

    you got the point, Kelly.
    Thanks for your comment. Grazie

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 10, 2015


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