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Parallel Dimensions

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Laughing,
You asked a pale, distraught
Moon
For a smile that would compete with
Yours (much brighter) , fully certain
That she couldn't win.
Then, through a restive finger you
Fended off the thirst from the

Chapped lips
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Parallel Dimensions
Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition,love,memory,psychological
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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this is the English translation of my poem ''DIMENSIONI PARALLELE''

This poem is part of my collection ''Nella Luce Confusa Del Crepuscolo'' (''In the Uncertain Light of the Twilight'')

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Persson 02 May 2016

A beautiful romance. Such a pleasure to read. Thank you Fabrizio

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 May 2016

it's very kind of you, Sahra, thanks

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Sahra Hussein 28 November 2015

I really like it. it is lovely one! !

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Fabrizio Frosini 28 November 2015

lovely comment, too.. :) Grazie!

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Pamela Sinicrope 11 September 2015

That's so romantic and charming! The mind is another dimension, out of time, especially in this context! I wish I could read your poem in Italian... Though the translation is still good. Lovely poem.

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Fabrizio Frosini 12 September 2015

thank you, Pamela, for your nice words. I've much appreciated your coming by and commenting on my poem.

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Kelly Kurt 09 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Fabrizio. The mind is another dimension, out of time.

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 September 2015

''The mind is another dimension, out of time.'' you got the point, Kelly. Thanks for your comment. Grazie

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