Part Of Me Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Part Of Me

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This is the part of me,
You want to love,
This the part of me,
You want to take,
That part which I am ready
To share, ready to bare.

This is the part of me,
You prayed for,
This is the part of me
Which you slayed,
Now that it is all yours
To care, to tear.

But darling, the part
Which I saved for myself,
I aint gonna let you touch,
Will protect it and let it grow,
While the other one dies,
In your thorny tending arms

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nellie Bredeson 04 November 2008

Nice poem. it beautifully written love the title.

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C. P. Sharma 04 November 2008

It is the immortal poetess in you that speaks through you. God bless the poetess.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 November 2008

wow... thought provoking... the part that is an integral entity of u... u tried exploring it bfully........

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Roger Cornish 04 November 2008

Pardoxical and inventive. Rx

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Shimon Weinroth 04 November 2008

mixed feelings a psyche and physical all in one vessel, a duality of sharing and the sacred independence, you expose more of yourself than you really intended? 10 good poem cheers Shimon

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a very well written poem....

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Brenda Tamayo 20 November 2008

This poem is so truly lovely!

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Gargi Saha 05 November 2008

well written.................. Love & hugs.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 November 2008

One part dies and the other continue to live, like body and soul...Wonderful poem Reshma...keep up the spirit...Poets die but their poems continue to live...!

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helena dombrowski 04 November 2008

one of your best pieces yet! keep up the good work hoping you are well, the devilz lil grl

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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