Party In The Sky....Everyone Invited! ! Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Party In The Sky....Everyone Invited! !

Rating: 3.8


Party in the sky

You are invited to a splendid party, high in the sky
It is the best of the season you cant deny
Ladies in organza gowns and men in bow tie
There is going to be spirits, in ample supply

The Stars are going to strip and dance
The Mountains are going to steal a glance
The Moon is wearing a designer halo from France
The Music and Dance are going to romance

The Planets are arriving at eight
They all have a pretty celestial date
Ready to sing and dance to recreate
Together they make a bright constellate

The Rainbow tosses its brilliant colors
The Clouds throw its splendid showers
The Black Sky showing its magical powers
The Morning Star and Twilight kiss in the towers

The Dark, dressed in lustrous diamonds, shone
Air wore his aviator and his best cologne
The Wind laughed as the trumpet is blown
The indigo Skies gossiped on their own

Aquila and Orion merrily dance hand in hand
Morning star walks with Sirius on the sand
Humble Crux kisses brilliant Vega softly offhand
The music, light, lovers unite making the sky grand

Dinner is served on a golden platter
Music is drowned among the busy chatter
Cider, vodka, gin, liqueur, sweet and bitter
Laughs, conversations, songs and twitter

As the noisy night turns into a dreamy day
The guests reluctantly retire to the milky way
The twilight patiently guides them all the way
Into deep sleep the tired night slips away
The sleepy sun wakes into the sky, silver grey

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakhi Jayashankar 02 October 2008

beautifull poem this is my favourite so far lovely i loveede each word u used i cant quote a single line coz evry line was beautiful outstanding thought 10 10 10 10

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Aiswarya. T.anish 01 October 2008

The Stars are going to strip and dance The Mountains are going to steal a glance The Moon is wearing a designer halo from France The Music and Dance are going to romance fantastic lines

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Adedolapo Olisa 01 October 2008

wondering weaving of words for a desirable rhythm and flow keep going up!

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Anjali Sinha 01 October 2008

simply beautiful thanks i was invited for the party i enjoyed the words and the flow +10 dear resh regards anjali (do read mine THIS ONE IS FOR ME)

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Kaye Cee 30 September 2008

This was an amazing, beautiful poem. And I think you should try to publish it. There are some literary mags who won't accept rhymes, but there are also ones that do. The poem was lively, it flowed and I don't think I saw one wrong word in it. Plus it's a nature poem. Kaye

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Riquetta Elliott 20 October 2008

This is an amazing concept in this poem.

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Beautiful-there is nothing like the magical mystery tour-it's so cosmic.Brilliant poem...Tens and kudos.

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Debbie Kean 06 October 2008

That's an amazing concept! Deb

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David Desantis 03 October 2008

This is so optimistic! I love it...i want to party in the sky....or atleast take enough drugs where i think i am jk!

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 October 2008

wow...what a poem! makes me journey with every lines....how i wished it will be real.... I wanna be there....

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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