Part Of Me Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Part Of Me

Rating: 3.6


This is the part of me,
You want to love,
This the part of me,
You want to take,
That part which I am ready
To share, ready to bare.

This is the part of me,
You prayed for,
This is the part of me
Which you slayed,
Now that it is all yours
To care, to tear.

But darling, the part
Which I saved for myself,
I aint gonna let you touch,
Will protect it and let it grow,
While the other one dies,
In your thorny tending arms

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

An interesting poem in an interesting form. Love with 10.

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Seema Chowdhury 28 October 2008

nicely composed poem. the title is interesting too.

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Taufeeq Yahiya 29 October 2008

nice one. its more lyrics though. deep in thoughts. simple yet soo touching. gud work. all the best

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Marvin Brato 30 October 2008

Loving someone is part of loving oneself, is what makes love whole! Nice romantic poem.

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Ken E Hall 02 November 2008

Hi - a very clever piece of word craft not letting him consume all of you, knowing yoga it all fits- luvli poem, regards Ken e Hall

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a very well written poem....

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Brenda Tamayo 20 November 2008

This poem is so truly lovely!

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Gargi Saha 05 November 2008

well written.................. Love & hugs.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 November 2008

One part dies and the other continue to live, like body and soul...Wonderful poem Reshma...keep up the spirit...Poets die but their poems continue to live...!

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helena dombrowski 04 November 2008

one of your best pieces yet! keep up the good work hoping you are well, the devilz lil grl

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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