````part One````...The Seduction. Poem by wardha jawdat

````part One````...The Seduction.

Rating: 2.9


there's something in your eyes
tonite
something i havent seen for a
long time
afraid to name it...even afraid to
try
dare i call it.? .dare i darling, call it
desire?
there it is again..that sparkle!
that twinkle!
that seductive
nuance,
i once decreed
was my
life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 25 September 2008

this poem descends in thought to one particular point, , life, , starting from sparle to desire, , , the stle is simple and leads the reade line my line, , , a 10 here, ,

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Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

wardha.......that was nice, easy and happy...........well penned

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 30 September 2008

bful usage of words... seductive...enchanting...comely... :)

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Trinity K 25 September 2008

it was.. twinkle.. just a tinkle it made a hurricane..................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! is it what they call BARMUDA mystry............. nothing remains...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ........ musings.. so enchanting...! ! !

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that seductive nuance, i once decreed was my life....In essence it is about the unsaid the transition from one shade to the other … the transition not the destination. So subtle so deceptive that you can deny under oath

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Koyel Mitra 25 September 2008

Your way of expressing is excellent.A 10!

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