Passion - Senryu Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Passion - Senryu

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don't ignite passion
it will burn till the last breath
candles in the sky ~

Tuesday, May 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajan T Renganathan 17 May 2023

Indeed passion drives us even through dark tunnels of life. Passion once ignited never fades this is another quality of a passion. Sharp cut using candles in sky made this haiku wonderful. Full ****

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Thank u so much Rajan ji, I really appreciate your positive comments.

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Pallavi Tripathi 18 May 2023

Really liked the imagery of this one.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 May 2023

Excellent piece Asim it left me speechless

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Anjandev Roy 17 May 2023

Brilliant haiku.....thank u..... friend.....

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Thank u so much my friend ADR for encouraging words.

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David Wood 17 May 2023

Passion is a virtue somewhat lacking in this world today. I wish it could become endemic.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Thanks much, I differ here, passion is there for war, hatred and loot (Corruption) but all negative passion.

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Martinez Salotori 17 May 2023

I wrote a tanka inspired by your Passion- Senryu.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Oh thanks much, I read it excellent tanka.

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