Passion - Senryu Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Passion - Senryu

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don't ignite passion
it will burn till the last breath
candles in the sky ~

Tuesday, May 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoyza Da Vinka 16 May 2023

Like stars (candles in sky) human passion never dies, it may fall to rise again but won't die. Keep this good spirit alive.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Thanks much Zoyza, wonderful interpretation.

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Pallavi Tripathi 18 May 2023

Really liked the imagery of this one.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 May 2023

Excellent piece Asim it left me speechless

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Anjandev Roy 17 May 2023

Brilliant haiku.....thank u..... friend.....

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Thank u so much my friend ADR for encouraging words.

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David Wood 17 May 2023

Passion is a virtue somewhat lacking in this world today. I wish it could become endemic.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Thanks much, I differ here, passion is there for war, hatred and loot (Corruption) but all negative passion.

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Martinez Salotori 17 May 2023

I wrote a tanka inspired by your Passion- Senryu.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 May 2023

Oh thanks much, I read it excellent tanka.

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