Path... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Path...

Rating: 5.0


The trumpet played out so sweet and
low, with such empathy and sorrow. The
big brass band seemed to understand, just
which way the song would go. Up through
the skies the song did flow, but deep into the
heart it was sewn. Now embedded and part
of life's new path... To learn to walk, in a new
and gentle knowing. With the touch of Christ's
heart, once so deeply held and felt, but now
forever showing...

Path...
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 February 2022

A bit philosophical but I can assess what the poetess intended to express here in humble manner. Great ink!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

Most beautiful poem, interwoven with precious words, introduced by the beautiful but sad trumpet sound, added life philosophy on the path of Life, first deep inside, now with Christ's Love showing 5 Stars full on TOP, dear Becca!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

This Song-poem truly touched my heart and so deeply felt. More than encore, my dear Becca

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

Most deserving With the touch of Christ's heart, once so deeply held and felt, but now forever showing...5 Stars full on TOP, my dar Becca, this gorgeous pom goes to My Favourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

I cite your very impressive and precious concluding lines: To learn to walk, in a new and gentle knowing. With the touch of Christ's heart, once so deeply held and felt, but now forever showing...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 February 2022

a wonderful poem Rebecca Bravo! Encore!

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