Peace Poem by Lucia Domingos Fula

Well written poem, luzia

Great...simply superb.....

Nice lines about peace. Keep writing, Luzia.

at the end i love it

Nicely written Imperfection finders are indeed never peaceful

I likes the poem on peace and this is an inspiring one.

I Like this poem, Good one

You move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon

you move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon

its short n true gd job for someone like u very unique 10+