Reshma Ramesh

Rookie - 56 Points (20th April / Bangalore, India)

Peace - Poem by Reshma Ramesh

I see u walking in the clouds watching the children play,
You cry for the their sorrows, sorrows on their way,
Your thoughts so beautiful, wanting to protect them all,
But that is not how it is going to be resolved.

You, dear friend, write with all you heart,
Maybe one day it will tear the devil apart,
The Gods will rule and there will be peace,
With your words ruling, the legacy of war will cease.

(For my dear friend Randy Hogan on PH)

Comments about Peace by Reshma Ramesh

  • rohit sapra (10/28/2008 9:59:00 AM)

    This poem is written with the usage of beautiful words and describes the poetic strength of a creative soul. (Report)Reply

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  • Randy Hogan (10/22/2008 3:34:00 PM)

    I could never say with words what that means to me. If i tried i would only have a tears in my eyes and frog in my throat. I give 10 to infinity! like ∞ the love you send goes around the world only to find it way back to you My dear friend
    Peace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Kholekile Monakali (10/17/2008 8:13:00 AM)

    ja you are right my friend peace is from God without him you will never be able to forgive someone........nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/15/2008 6:54:00 AM)

    Quite mature composition, well measured with fine stanzaic pattern, ,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Emancipation Planz (10/14/2008 11:26:00 PM)

    Sieze the moments... both of you... keep righting them one peace at a time.... shalom... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008

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