Thursday, November 20, 2008

Peak At Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love spoke in the quiet dawn.
On the ground a simple fawn.
Light came through an open window.
Shadows played upon the meadow.
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JOE POEWHIT
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Sandra Dodd 28 January 2010

Well I spent sone of my moments reading your poem and it is not to be regretted.

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Tanvi Damle 22 January 2010

wow...the way you've said it is so perfect! i loved it :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2009

Here, the fine words-the descriptors emitted amazing signifieds/meaning! 10+

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Ritty Patnaik 14 June 2009

moments dont last, .all the moments put together makes a lifetime! it is a outstanding poem of nature and grace of almighty.

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Antonio Liao 10 June 2009

beats and bits of man's journey....so perfect for a prayer lovely poem....in time like this...wondering where to go... God bless.... a10+++++

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May Namoc 20 November 2008

interesting view on it, i love the descriptions. great piece.

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