Perfect Poem by krissi b'williams

Perfect

Rating: 5.0


i never thought i'd find some1
who is as perfect as you
you make my life complete
in everything you do
thats so true....

I love everything about you
your walk, your talk, your kiss
i never had a love so strong
a love as strong as this

eachday that ithink about you
is each day i love you more
you are my life, my world, my love
all that i adore

when its my time to leave
and return to heaven above
i will already know what heaven feels like
for having you, my love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 17 June 2009

U got the same poem twice haha 10s

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Kevin Fisher 17 June 2009

thats also beautiful amazing rhyme and it portrays great love and emotion another 10 for you great work keep them short like this your short ones to me are your best ones

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Krista'lyntinia Lancelaotti 27 November 2009

PERFECT...10S ALL THE WAY

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Teresa Babson 29 September 2009

you named this poem correctly, for it is perfect

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Something Special 14 August 2009

you promptly named this poem correct

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Beker john 27 June 2009

fantastic poem i love it so romantic 10

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beautiful passionated poem Krissi..10+++

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