Fighting Time Poem by krissi b'williams

Fighting Time

Rating: 5.0
 


we become enemies...resistant to the words
that me life or death,4 the love in our world
we argue n we fight
but who ever comes out right
just the insight
of how cruel we can be
with the words we say, the games we play
the nasty insults thrown at you n me
what did we accomplish...when our fight came to an end
we apologized, but our hearts didnt mend
we promised we forgive each other, but did we really...no
the hurt will still linger for another few days or so
cards.flowers.candy..they do mean
that we are trully sorry, for what we did
and its more ways of apologizing for stupid things we said
BUT HERES A? ? ? , AND A FACT FOR YOU
MANY WORDS ARE SAID IN JEST....
ISNT THAT SO OFTEN TRUE....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a heartfelt touching poem Krissi.. i like you your poems which let me live your stories as iam watching a movie..wil visit later dear as i have few minutes only here..regards..

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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

love your diversity..from long novel poems to short insightful poems..your poems have got me into poetry..for they are poems i understand and can relate too

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Eyan Desir 05 December 2009

Where man and woman live there is confusion always......it can't be stop..

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Kassiah Gervaise 27 November 2009

this poem makes a good point.beautiful jod and a nice writing style.

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Lady Grace 01 July 2009

hi krissi...since i can't give you 20 coz i dont want to be called a liar and can't give you 8 or 9 might i'm too honest so..here's my 10 honey...heheheheh..love ur comment on my poem..smileeeeeeeeeee..goodmorning.grace

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Lady Grace 26 June 2009

i like the flow here..it is very interesting., .infact, i am maybe like this? ..i have a friend, we alwas argue on nonsense things, but still after our argumentations or exchanging hurting wrds, we still laugh and say 'hi' to each other..u know, accepting one's mistakes is not bad..for me, i always talk less pride and so to him maybe..tho, maybe those wrds we throw are not hurting words but maybe sweet wrds for our ears..i dont know what will be the result for this but hope we are still friends..friends are open to accept what's happening..grace

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