Perfect Choice Poem by Rini Shibu

Perfect Choice

Rating: 4.4


Deep down in the ocean
I searched among the thousands
And I found the real oyster
Holding the pristine pearl

The pure and lustrous gem
adorn the heart of mine
The precious pearl that I have
Is the perfect choice of mine

Friday, October 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 06 October 2017

True love is indeed precious like a pearl. A beautiful write on the value of love and relationship.

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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

When we find the right person for us it is a pearl.++10

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Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2017

To me it seems a metaphor, a real oyster with a pristine pearl, may be an ancient book of wisdom, may be an ideolgy (religion) or a true lover. Whatever it may be it's Rini Shibu's choice that gave her a powerful voice to express her love in this nicely written poem. Let the reader understand it according to his choice.

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Rini Shibu 08 October 2017

Thanks for your wider view, it's reader choice how they interpret

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 October 2017

Deep down! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Thanks you so much Edward Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 October 2017

Hi Rini, To make the right choice at the right time is very important in one's life. To enable one to do this, one should have immense knowledge, courage and conviction. And of course, His blessings. In Bhagavat Gita, Sage Vyasa has mentioned about the predicament of Arjuna as Senayorubhayor Madhhye- between two armies intent to fight each other. At every point in life, we are facing this situation. Making a choice is quite difficult. And any choice we make, might prove bad later, in hindsight. So making a Perfect Choice gains so much of importance. That is why I loved your beautiful poem. Great write. Congrats, dear Rini. A 100++ for this exquisite piece. -unnikrishnan

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Thanks for the review and encouragement

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Lamar Cole 06 October 2017

This is a very wonderful and enjoyable poem about perfect choice.

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Rini Shibu 06 October 2017

Thanks a lot Lam... Rini

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