Peace Of Mind Poem by Rini Shibu

Peace Of Mind

Rating: 5.0


Never never again
Do this again
Echoing in the mind
Do always the right
Who said it is right
How this became wrong
If mind perceives wrong as right
There won't be any wrong
Nor any right then
All that exist will be peace of mind

Sunday, October 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 October 2017

If mind perceives wrong as right There won't be any wrong Nor any right then Beautiful logic embedded.. lovely poem shared Rini A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 02 October 2017

Thanks subhas, we human created this rights and wrongs.. Life will be so beautiful if there is no such worries

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Lamar Cole 01 October 2017

This is a very thought invoking poem about peace of mind.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2022

If mind perceives wrong as right There won't be any wrong....true. Liked this poem.5 stars.

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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

A beautiful expression of right and wrong.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2017

Never again! ! Overcoming the odds with positive morals and live in peace. Thanks for sharing.

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Sister Frances 02 October 2017

I love the rhetorical question what's wrong what's right :) cleverly written Rini

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Rini Shibu 02 October 2017

Thanks for your comments Hannah. Rini

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 October 2017

Peace of mind comes only when we do not judge either right or wrong. Anyway, who are we to judge. We are here, on this earth, only to do our karma. Kumarmaniji is right. Lets leave the judgement to God. A full mark for you Rini for the peace of mind.

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Rini Shibu 02 October 2017

Geetha glad that you liked it.. Thanks for the full marks

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