Crimson Love

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Pieces - Poem by Crimson Love

We proceeded into forever,
slowly consuming each-other;
a heart for a heart,
one whole,
the other...significantly less.

I have nothing to give her but pieces....
a heart to sharp to hold.
yet she takes it.
She holds it within parted fingers,
and open palms.

The last and final bits I've given.

I am gone.


Comments about Pieces by Crimson Love

  • Thoughts Of A Poet (10/19/2012 1:45:00 PM)


    this is a good poem i love how your words fit the poem, i think you are a very good writer and you should continue writing poems cuz you are so good at it, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 28, 2012



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