the rumble of drums
the warming rhum
the rumble hits me
the rhum redeems me
I can't stand rumbling
or just junk
I can stand the rhum
I close my ears
but I keep my mouth open
in case of
to defend myself
against the rhum
(Source: Poems from the Junk Box)
Yes you can stand on the top of success. The warming rhum rumbles with mumbles of mind and you have penned an amazing poem with brilliant perception. Poem is duty and we understand it well. Truth matters a lot. All stars bloom and smile.
The rumble of drums the warming rhum the rumble hits me the rhum redeems me
Good poem! Enjoyed reading it!