Poem For Thorsten Poem by Marieta Maglas
Poem For Thorsten
My unique perfect love,
The world will never be separated
into two parts from now on.
We need the freedom of love,
For our suffering.
My baron
And my first fiancé.
We need to express our uniqueness.
We had all freedom for our suffering...
Even we never understood the reason for our suffering...
We needed this freedom for love.
This great struggle for freedom, around the world.
The wall was broken, my love,
That visible wall.
The wall of broken dreams.
And you see my love, it was not our last dance.
Fighting between good and evil for our souls
And for this freedom.
And for this last chance
To dance together
Again and again
Like the very first time...
When we wanted to be good.
A Melody restaurant,
A picture with both of us,
A very well-sculptured door behind us,
and Valea Draganului.
You and I, absolutely meant to be together.
Meaning to be existent...
The Lord looking
To both of us.
The Lord wanting for us
To be together.
Me and you being separated
By others,
Losing our hopes,
And hoping, at the same time,
that The Lord
Will change the world
For this love...
Poem by Marieta Maglas
a deep sentiments of love...splendid thoughts writte nicely......10
A beauty of love. Deep thoughts of write Lord is always there for you Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
you've penned this with beauty coz the theme lovely. thanks for sharing this poem to me.
Beautifully penned transitional conflict between the physical and the spiritual world and great dedication to someone you really love. CP
This is a lovely, heartfelt tribute, dear Marieta. We offer our prayers for The Lord to help you so your beautiful free dreams come true. Good luck! Maria
Hi Mari - A truely beutiful poem straight from your lovely Heart. Free verse - free expression - free flow. Very emotive content - it all adds up to a TEN. Whatever age we are we all crave Freedom. Freedom from FEAR - for and from our PAIN and (above all else) for LOVE. I have learned that the World is full of WALLS (visible & invisible) . Walls to keep us IN and walls to keep us OUT - and many many 'Walls of broken Dreams' (this line alone is worth a TEN) . What is a 'Real last Dance'? A dance to say HELLO? A dance to say GOODBYE? A dance frozen in TIME? Please save the last dance for me - Mari We often feel in a relationship that GOD is happy with us and really wants us to be togther (however incongruous) - but forced apart by HUMAN displeasure - WHY? In TIME God does change all things - but alas 'For this LOVE' the timescale was inappropriate 'The world did change' but much to slowly - FOR THIS LOVE. Thanks for sharing Mari it has made us all think about our own 'Broken Dreams'. Love you in Poetry - SOUL BROTHER JOHN..
that The Lord Will change the world For this love........................ love true as resolute of unshakable faith yet when intense that happens to happen.......loving heart yet breaks all the walls around the universe, most passionate write by ingenuity as expressed in metaphors and imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing
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I would like to translate this poem
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The Lord Will change the world For this love... yes, the Lord within you. Thanks, Mari. Liked it very much.