A house
beside a shady tree
and tarred road
heaped up stones
three poles and plastic roof
walled with torn sacks
A gaze
as if in trance
a gleam
in the eyes
a smile between parting lips
not at all at the far away mansions
the indweller
An ever- flowering tree
grew out of nowhere
a poet, a poem
(India, May 2007)
'A house...A gaze...An ever-flowing tree' Well Done! Rave...
a nice foliage in my mind and in greenish shadow flowering tree grew out of nowhere a poet, a
This is stunning Raveendran! Bold images rich with experience. Evocative, richly rewarding penning. I agree with Max. The last lines are superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I love those last lines, which you set up well with your earlier, descriptive stanzas.
Excellent poem, well thought out, with deep themes. I enjoyed reading this very much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fascinating glimpse of what you are seeing from your own personal window on the world. Keep up the good work. Kind regards, Sandra