Poetic Suicide Poem by Tia Maria

Poetic Suicide

Rating: 5.0


As the red rose that turned to black
Is the bud that just could not bloom
November rain brought so much pain
On what started suddenly ended so soon

Silence has replaced the sounds of song
All is quiet and become uncomfortably numb
Words have no substance and cannot rhyme
As the empty page ends in poetic suicide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 01 December 2008

Things go around to come around again - and soon the poetry bug will bite Tia... but I loved your imagery...... a 10 from Fay for this tender acknowlegment to the times when we lose our muse......xx

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Kris Smith 18 November 2008

Roses will bloom again they never go away 10 Chris

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Billy Joe Collins 18 November 2008

i offen want to write but my mind is blank good poem keep trying it will come

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Mamta Agarwal 18 November 2008

well composed. mood poetically expressed.

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