Poisoned Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Poisoned



Tattered had been my love!
With a shattered heart that has mended.
When I thought it unbearable...
To witnessed the lips I kissed,
Shared with another.
I have since gotten over it!
And my thoughts of suicide.

I was prepared to take a nose dive,
Into oblivion.

Then it dawn upon me...
You have every right,
To live your life...
As the slut you are!
And if God had not shown me that...
You would have had me poisoned,
For the rest of my life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Everson 11 April 2009

Aside from two major mistakes in language this is extremely good! SHExx

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Sandra Martyres 11 April 2009

Very strong words...demonstrating the anger and hurt that you felt Lawrence at being let down and cheated by someone you loved....

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