Poor Advice - Κακή Συμβουλή Poem by Kostas Lagos

Poor Advice - Κακή Συμβουλή

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If it pours

walk slowly

let the rain

soak you

to the marrow

this way you'll feel

the kiss of earth

or you'll get

pneumonia



Αν βρέχει καταρρακτωδώς

περπάτα αργά

άσε τη βροχή

να σε μουσκέψει

ως το μεδούλι

έτσι θα νιώσεις

το φιλί της γης

ή θ΄αρπάξεις

καμιά πνευμονία

Tuesday, December 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,illness,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 04 June 2019

Love the humor, and there are some people that give advice like that.

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Kostas Lagos 06 June 2019

Most of my friends are like that! Haha!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 December 2018

So amusing expression. It is a beautiful poem on rain with humor. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kostas Lagos 13 December 2018

Thanks a lot my friend! Glad you found it amusing

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Mihaela Pirjol 13 December 2018

Very cleverly done! Lovely, Lovely!

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Kostas Lagos 13 December 2018

Thank you Mihaela! Greetings from a rainy Athens!

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Georgios Venetopoulos 13 December 2018

How long does it take to compose a poem in rain?

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Kostas Lagos 13 December 2018

It depends if you're holding an umbrella or not...

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 December 2018

beautiful poem /// so feel through marrow don't be here mind -narrow some advice can borrow to make life shining azure-blue

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Kostas Lagos 12 December 2018

The nicest comment! Thanks!

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