Positive Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi
Positive
(dedicated to Nimal Dunuhinga)
Look all things foreign
You’ll need to be pro-active
Problems or tension can end
You act with integrity and maturity
You have the opportunity
To work out your priority
When it comes tenderly
To balance your social life
You make an effort
To think and feel positively
You’ll be able to manifest dreams
Through your power of intentions
(inspired by Robert Schumann’s Symphony No.3)
This one dances along trochaicly Ahmad and you have thought out the phrasing very adeptly, with the use again of the beauiful source of music as reason, you have captured a unique presentation of poetry here. Excellent.
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5/10/2024 7:18:04 PM # 1.0.0.1119
ideals of a good balance... well-written.