(dedicated to Ms. Lorraine Hunt, a great mezzo-soprano)
a fallen leaf
hugs the roof
a fallen leaf
sends a grief
a fallen leaf
has to leave
a fallen leaf
such relief
a fallen leaf
smiles to me
a fallen leaf
touches me
a fallen leaf
dreams of me
a fallen leaf
loves me
O fallen leaf!
no more, no more
you left me
no more, no more
O fallen leaf!
be with me
wherever
be with me
wasnt knoing a fallen leaf can convey so much... loved it.. nice write..
Even a fallen leaf touches the poet which cannot be apprehended by all! Leaves leave many stories in the hearts of lonely persons. Yours is one instance!
A fallen leaf brings out the warmth and glowing parts of your poem. The repetition makes it even more interesting. A very good write. Your friend Lynn
It is not clear why a fallen leaf loves you? The subject is interesting though.
its beautiful is this a song? sounds like a song for me. touchy romantic rhyme
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A philosophical thought well expressed in verse! -Raj Nandy